Tutorials for today's writer

First 5 Pages Critiqued

Master Instructor

Jodi Henley

Start: OCTOBER 16, 2018

at 9:00 AM Eastern Time

End: OCTOBER 29, 2018

at 11:59 PM Eastern Time

  • Classroom opens 24 hrs before
    workshop begins
  • Classroom remains open for 20
    days after end of workshop

I signed up for Jodi's workshop on transformational arcs because of specific comments from two acquiring editors. Jodi took the time to understand my situation, the editorial feedback, and my novella, including what I could (and should) realistically accomplish in that length piece. I didn't expect to receive such detailed one-on-one feedback.

Kristine Bria


All Levels



Registration Fee



Oct 15 ~ 11:59 PM
Eastern Time

Jodi Henley is a developmental editor based in the Seattle area, Jodi specializes in character-driven fiction, and is well-known for her ability to turn theory into practical, usable bites. A big fan of the transformational character arc, emotional structure and backstory, Jodi spends her days utilizing the information in her workshops. Jodi believes that there is no one size fits all approach to learning, and has dedicated her workshops to helping people learn in a way that works for them.

Description of Workshop:

Readers, editors and agents often stop reading by the end of the first 5 pages. Why does that happen? The story took too long to get moving, the readers didn't engage with the character, the opening was confusing, there was too much information, there wasn't enough information, they weren't hooked enough to continue ... and so on. There are a lot of reasons to put a story down. It's your job to force that reader to keep turning pages. Professional editor Jodi Henley can pinpoint issues quickly and give you specifics for improving your opening. There's a saying in the publishing business that "the opening sells the first book and the ending sells the next book." You may have an explosive story deeper in, but the reader will never know if they stop short. Take advantage of this offer to have the first 5 pages of your story reviewed by an editor who knows what she's doing. Grab your readers from page one and don't let go of them.

Fiction and Narrative nonfiction welcome. Bring a word document of your first 5 pages (only) and in proper manuscript format: Double spaced, 1" borders all around, 12 pt font (normally Courier or Times New Roman). You don't have to stop in the middle of a sentence. Find a good place to stop after the end of a sentence within those five pages. Any additional pages will not be critiqued. Once you enter the classroom (it opens 24 hours before the workshop starts) you'll find place to load your homework where only you and Jodi will be able to access the pages.

Jodi would also appreciate it if you'd also bring your literal ending (the last chapter, last five pages, etc) and a synopsis or free form ramble of what your story is about. Because she's a developmental editor, she likes to make sure everything works together to produce a cohesive whole.


What is required to be prepared for this class?

You may enter this workshop at any point during the 2 weeks it is available. You can submit your 5 pages until the last day. The classroom will remain open for 20 additional days after the workshop ends so that you can review any comments posted by students and Jodi. This will also allow her time to complete pages and return them to the students.

Will there be homework and feedback?


Additional Information:

Although there is no homework, you are welcome to re-work your five pages using the feedback provided and resubmit it for another look.

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